A Studio Course at the Srishti School of Art, Design & Technology from July 12 to September 20.
Course facilitators: Ampat V Varghese & Raghavendra Rao
Hi Polo - Some comments:This Before-After thing has been tried before and if you use that device it must work even more powerfully than your cartoon is at present. I think you are again at that point where you are too simplistic and work with the first simplistic thing that comes to mind. So try to break out of it. Simplistic is not a compliment! This reflects in both your cartoons. I want you to look at a lot of cartoons and see why your cartoons seem "empty" in a visual sense.It might also be important for you to actually develop a sense of humor.
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